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UPSC MAINS ESSENTIALS - ANSWER WRITING PRACTICE (16/12/2024)

UPSC MAINS ESSENTIALS 

 
 
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UPSC Exam Notes presents a dedicated initiative to help you excel in Mains answer writing practice. This program covers both static and dynamic components of the UPSC Civil Services syllabus across various General Studies (GS) papers. Each session is crafted to provide valuable insights and techniques to improve your answer-writing skills, aiming to enrich your preparation for the UPSC CSE Mains. Start with today’s answer-writing exercise based on GS-2 topics to evaluate and track your progress.

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UPSC Exam Notes offers guidance on structuring Mains answers effectively to maximize your score and presentation.

Introduction

  • Begin your answer with a concise introduction of 3-5 lines. Avoid one-liner introductions as they often lack context.
  • Start by providing basic information, definitions, or key facts from trusted sources to set the foundation for your answer.

Body

  • This is the core of your answer. Analyze the question carefully to understand its requirements and address each aspect fully.
  • Use a mix of points and short paragraphs for clarity. Avoid long paragraphs or purely point-based responses, as balanced formatting enhances readability.
  • Incorporate data from reliable sources, such as government publications, to strengthen your arguments and make your answer more credible.
  • Analyze based on the question’s demand, but avoid over-analysis, which may dilute the answer’s impact.
  • Highlight key terms by underlining, helping your response stand out and improving its presentation.
  • Use flowcharts or tree diagrams where relevant to organize information efficiently, saving time and boosting clarity. These should be applied thoughtfully and only when they add real value.

Way Forward/Conclusion

  • Conclude on a positive, forward-looking note. Highlight potential solutions or the broader implications of your analysis.
  • If an unresolved issue is crucial to the topic, briefly mention it, but avoid repeating points from the introduction or body.
  • Where applicable, reference findings from relevant national or international reports, surveys, or quotations to add weight to your conclusion.

Self-Evaluation

This is a crucial step in answer-writing practice. UPSC Exam Notes provides evaluation guidelines to help you critically assess your responses and refine your thought process for future improvement.
 
Question 1. Analyze the importance of Mahatma Gandhi's initial Satyagraha in South Africa and how this event represented a pivotal moment in the development of his philosophy of nonviolent resistance.
 

Model Answer (Approach Outline):

This is not a definitive model answer but an approach to tackling the question effectively.

Introduction:

— On June 7, 1893, Mohandas Karamchand Gandhi, a young lawyer, was forcibly removed from a train's first-class compartment at the Pietermaritzburg railway station in South Africa, which was reserved exclusively for ‘whites.’ This incident sparked Gandhi’s first act of civil disobedience, known as Satyagraha.

— The Pietermaritzburg event is regarded by Gandhians as a pivotal moment in his life. As he mentioned in his autobiography, the incident symbolized the widespread issue of racial discrimination, and he felt it was his “duty” to combat it.

Body:

— Gandhi’s time in South Africa had a profound impact on both his personal growth and philosophical outlook.

— He engaged in debates with Christians who questioned his religious practices, which led him to adopt a more inclusive spiritual perspective.

— Gandhi fought against prejudice faced by Indian traders, opposed attempts to disenfranchise Indian voters in Natal, and authored a "guidebook" for Indian students, reflecting his commitment to both personal and professional development.


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